The Greatest Character of All Time: BART

Well it's a yes to the RP school request, you'll have to ask Pan about the drawing, but I'm not sure about the profile. Can I have a second opinion please? I'm not sure if you've got enough there...

Yeah, you're right. I'll get you a spot in the RP school as soon as I've finished setting it up, give me the details of any drawings you want done, and I'd say you need more under the personality and story sections. Some pointers: for personality try going into how they interact with other people, you only need a couple of lines for that bit. It's more what you've written there than the amount.
For his story, you need at least a paragraph. I would recommend maybe describing how he survived after his parents died (I'm only assuming that the mother died, but you haven't actually said), maybe explain why his family abandoned him. You just need to go into a bit more detail. If you're struggling, try looking at the character profiles that have already been approved, that should help you out a bit.
The rest is fine, but you can't be approved until you've sorted that out and completed your RP sample. I see Kodi's approved your canon claims, you can RP with Sid and Buck until you're done here. Let me or one of the other staff members know if you have any questions and we'll help you out.

^ Thanks Pan

No problem. Let me know if you need anything else

Thanks for the pointers, I will work on it now. It's nice that you take the time to give those pointers rather than just telling me to add to it.

Aaww, you're welcome If you need any help with it let me know and I'll go over it to your RP lessons.